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Chapter One: The Debt Beneath the Willow Bridge

The rain did not fall from the sky. It rose from the river.

Mist lifted in pale sheets from the Black Willow River, coiling around the stone pylons of Willow Bridge like breath escaping a dying mouth. Lanterns hung beneath the arches flickered weakly, their light bent and swallowed by the fog. Most nights, this bridge belonged only to ghosts and fishermen with nothing left to lose.

Tonight, it waited for Andrew.

He stood at the riverbank, shoes soaked, fingers numb, staring at the water as if it might blink first. He was sixteen and already tired in the way only the truly cornered became—bones heavy, thoughts sharpened to points.

Three copper coins lay in his palm. That was all his mother had left him when she died.

“You shouldn’t come here,” said an old voice behind him. “Debts are heavier than bodies.”

Andrew did not turn. He already knew who it was.

“Master Gu,” he said quietly. “You said if I wanted answers, I should come when the river breathes upward.”

The ferryman laughed, a sound like oars scraping bone. “I said answers might come. I did not say they would be kind.”

Master Gu stepped beside him, lantern in hand. His beard was knotted with riverweed, his robe stained dark where water never quite dried. No one remembered when he had first appeared at the bridge. Some said he ferried souls. Others said he collected regrets.

Both were true, in different currencies.

“You’ve been following me,” Andrew said.

“Yes.”

“You let my mother die.”

“No,” Master Gu corrected. “I let her choice finish.”

That finally made Andrew turn. Anger burned through the cold, sharp and unsteady. “She paid you. Every month. Blood-money from the Loom Guild. You promised protection.”

“I promised delay.” Master Gu lifted the lantern. The light revealed something etched into the stone at their feet—old characters, half-eroded, carved deep. A contract circle.

Andrew’s breath caught.

This was not a bridge.

It was a ledger.

“Your mother owed the river,” Master Gu said. “Not coin. Not blood. Time.”

The mist thickened. The river’s surface rippled, though there was no wind. Shapes moved beneath—long, slow shadows, like thoughts turning in sleep.

“She stole from the Loom,” Andrew said. “She altered fate-threads. I know that much.”

“She repaired them,” Master Gu replied. “For people the world had already decided to discard. Children who would drown. Women who would starve. Soldiers meant to die unnamed in mud.”

Andrew swallowed. “And the cost?”

“Every repair tightens the weave elsewhere,” said the ferryman. “Eventually, the Loom notices. When it does, it collects.”

A sharp memory surfaced—his mother coughing blood into cloth, whispering apologies she never finished.

The three copper coins in Andrew’s palm grew hot.

Master Gu’s eyes flicked down. For the first time, his smile faded.

“You have her marker,” he said. “She passed the debt.”

“I didn’t agree to anything.”

“No one ever does.”

The river surged. A pale hand broke the surface, fingers jointed wrong, etched with glowing thread-marks. Then another. And another.

Andrew stepped back, heart hammering. “What happens now?”

Master Gu set the lantern on the stone and reached into his robe. He withdrew a needle—black, slender, humming faintly, as if alive.

“You have two paths,” he said. “The river takes you tonight. Clean. Quick. Your mother’s debt ends.”

“And the other?”

“You take her place.”

Andrew stared at the needle. Fate-thread shimmered along its length, colors he had never seen, like dawn trapped in steel.

“I don’t know how,” he said.

“Neither did she,” Master Gu replied. “That is why she lasted so long.”

The river hands clawed closer, scraping stone.

Andrew thought of the Loom Guild towers, tall and indifferent. Of the children in the alleys who still lived because someone had quietly said no to destiny. Of his mother’s hands, always shaking, always steady when it mattered.

He closed his fingers around the coins.

“Teach me,” he said.

Master Gu smiled again, slow and sharp. “Very well, Threadbearer.”

The needle pierced Andrew’s skin.

Pain flared—then meaning. The mist recoiled. The river stilled.

Somewhere far away, a bell rang in the Loom.

And the world, which had never noticed Andrew before, finally looked back.

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Chapter One: The Debt Beneath the Willow Bridge

The rain did not fall from the sky. It rose from the river.

Mist lifted in pale sheets from the Black Willow River, coiling around the stone pylons of Willow Bridge like breath escaping a dying mouth. Lanterns hung beneath the arches flickered weakly, their light bent and swallowed by the fog. Most nights, this bridge belonged only to ghosts and fishermen with nothing left to lose.

Tonight, it waited for Andrew.

He stood at the riverbank, shoes soaked, fingers numb, staring at the water as if it might blink first. He was sixteen and already tired in the way only the truly cornered became—bones heavy, thoughts sharpened to points.

Three copper coins lay in his palm. That was all his mother had left him when she died.

“You shouldn’t come here,” said an old voice behind him. “Debts are heavier than bodies.”

Andrew did not turn. He already knew who it was.

“Master Gu,” he said quietly. “You said if I wanted answers, I should come when the river breathes upward.”

The ferryman laughed, a sound like oars scraping bone. “I said answers might come. I did not say they would be kind.”

Master Gu stepped beside him, lantern in hand. His beard was knotted with riverweed, his robe stained dark where water never quite dried. No one remembered when he had first appeared at the bridge. Some said he ferried souls. Others said he collected regrets.

Both were true, in different currencies.

“You’ve been following me,” Andrew said.

“Yes.”

“You let my mother die.”

“No,” Master Gu corrected. “I let her choice finish.”

That finally made Andrew turn. Anger burned through the cold, sharp and unsteady. “She paid you. Every month. Blood-money from the Loom Guild. You promised protection.”

“I promised delay.” Master Gu lifted the lantern. The light revealed something etched into the stone at their feet—old characters, half-eroded, carved deep. A contract circle.

Andrew’s breath caught.

This was not a bridge.

It was a ledger.

“Your mother owed the river,” Master Gu said. “Not coin. Not blood. Time.”

The mist thickened. The river’s surface rippled, though there was no wind. Shapes moved beneath—long, slow shadows, like thoughts turning in sleep.

“She stole from the Loom,” Andrew said. “She altered fate-threads. I know that much.”

“She repaired them,” Master Gu replied. “For people the world had already decided to discard. Children who would drown. Women who would starve. Soldiers meant to die unnamed in mud.”

Andrew swallowed. “And the cost?”

“Every repair tightens the weave elsewhere,” said the ferryman. “Eventually, the Loom notices. When it does, it collects.”

A sharp memory surfaced—his mother coughing blood into cloth, whispering apologies she never finished.

The three copper coins in Andrew’s palm grew hot.

Master Gu’s eyes flicked down. For the first time, his smile faded.

“You have her marker,” he said. “She passed the debt.”

“I didn’t agree to anything.”

“No one ever does.”

The river surged. A pale hand broke the surface, fingers jointed wrong, etched with glowing thread-marks. Then another. And another.

Andrew stepped back, heart hammering. “What happens now?”

Master Gu set the lantern on the stone and reached into his robe. He withdrew a needle—black, slender, humming faintly, as if alive.

“You have two paths,” he said. “The river takes you tonight. Clean. Quick. Your mother’s debt ends.”

“And the other?”

“You take her place.”

Andrew stared at the needle. Fate-thread shimmered along its length, colors he had never seen, like dawn trapped in steel.

“I don’t know how,” he said.

“Neither did she,” Master Gu replied. “That is why she lasted so long.”

The river hands clawed closer, scraping stone.

Andrew thought of the Loom Guild towers, tall and indifferent. Of the children in the alleys who still lived because someone had quietly said no to destiny. Of his mother’s hands, always shaking, always steady when it mattered.

He closed his fingers around the coins.

“Teach me,” he said.

Master Gu smiled again, slow and sharp. “Very well, Threadbearer.”

The needle pierced Andrew’s skin.

Pain flared—then meaning. The mist recoiled. The river stilled.

Somewhere far away, a bell rang in the Loom.

And the world, which had never noticed Andrew before, finally looked back.